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actually not harsh

this is exactly the kind of concrete feedback I was hoping for. You’re right that the quick-start paragraph explains the actual value better than the current pitch… Thank you for taking the time to look at this.

actually not harsh

this is exactly the kind of concrete feedback I was hoping for. You’re right that the quick-start paragraph explains the actual value better than the current pitch… I should lead with that, then treat the binary size and platform support as supporting details rather than the headline.

Thank you for taking the time to look at this.